The only thing I noticed was verb-tense agreement: "some girl, the flyers, are lifted..." Looks like you're missing an "s." You want to borrow my style guide? I can't be arsed to look it up for you. :)
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Date: 2008-02-28 04:28 pm (UTC)Online resources for all things reference can be found at bartleby.com.